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Adam Fear
 Posted: Apr 4 2012, 02:50 AM
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GENDER : male SEXUALITY : heterosexual ALIGNMENT : Neutral MEMBER GROUP : Kitsune FAMILY : Unknown; age; occupation; alive/dead Unknown; age; occupation; alive/deadFalen Gray; 90; Doctor/Vampire Hunter; aliveUnknown; age; occupation; alive/dead APPEARANCE : HAIR: Black EYES: Turquoise TATTOOS: none SCARS: None OTHER: N/A CLOTHING: Causual attire Adam Fear was born in a small fishing village somewhere in Wales, however his parents gave him up for adoption soon after he was born. Adam was one of the unwanted children the misfit who never seemed to appeal to any family, in fact the only friend he had was a little girl who was originally from Japan, but after her parents moved to old blighty they settled down for a bit, however after a few years their neighbors began to suspect what they really were and the suspicion continued to build and build. Until finally they had concrete evividence that the couple living near them were not human, their child was taken from them and placed into the care of the county after which the parents were driven from their home. Adam and Saia were inseperable until one day she bit him, after that he didn't find her all that appealing as a friend and he avoided her at all costs. And of course she was adopted, but that one little bite was the beginning of the end of his life as a human. He stayed in the orphanage until his thirteenth birthday it was at that point he decided it was time to leave (after years of neglect, abuse, moonlight strolls, ect..) So, one night he snuck out but he did so knowing that he might be caught fortunately, he was never missed (even after he left…he didn’t leave much of an impression). Adam traveled from one town to the next, never staying in one place for very long especially during the full moon when his change was at its most erratic, he was always in a rush to leave for fear that he would be chased out, in a` way he beat them to the punch by taking the initiative. (Skipping ahead twenty years because the rest of my life story really doesn’t begin until I meet my brother) Adam had often thought about traveling to France just as a passing fancy so he stowed away on the nearest boat he could find and as luck would have it they were on their way to Calais, as soon as they made port he made his escape only stopping long enough to replenish his supplies. Then he was back on the road again traveling through vast farmland and cutting across vineyards only to run into a man, he was troubled and muttering about how he lost his family to a vampire. At that moment Adam immediately identified with the man telling him that he was also an orphan, they were often mistaken for brothers not because they looked similar (which wasn’t the case at all) but because of the way they looked out for one another. It was only natural that they referred to one another as family, even though they were not blood related. And to this day Adam is still poking fun at his brother and working a steady job of his own- he's a school teacher of all things. “Adam is a seven tailed gray fox shifter, with typical kitsune powers and abilities." YOUR NAME : AsherAGE : Twenty-fourSEX : female. EXPERIENCE : name or alias here. ANITA BLAKE SERIES : Reading OTHER CHARACTERS : FalenHOW YOU FOUND US : Falen told me SAMPLE POST : “Falen…did you honestly think I wouldn’t find out? You do realize I wasn’t doing this for a laugh, I want you to actually get out and enjoy life it can’t be all about work. Don’t you snap at me I’ll come over there and claw through that brand new couch of yours. Oh yeah? Well you have a funny way of showing your gratitude brother and what? You going to wait another twenty years? I understand you’re a doctor I wasn’t trying to…Oh you leave my personal life out of this…Uh-huh at least I have one you just want to spend your life as a sullen old maid…Well bully for you I hope you and work are very happy together…adios birk!” Adam said angrily as he hung up his phone with a huff sometimes talking to his brother was like pulling teeth-always got harder the further in you got and it always ended in either Adam or Falen calling a few minutes after the fact just to apologize. So, at least they knew each other well enough to forgive one another. Adam only wanted liven up his brothers life and no matter how hard Falen tried to push away Adam was always there to pull him back, in a way he was the yin to his brothers yang. To be perfectly honest he did not care one whit who knew that little fact, he was always going to stand by his brother through thick and thin…no matter what. Adam paced impatiently around obviously giving serious thought to callling him back just to apologize, but he wanted to give his brother the opportunity to make the first move. Application created, coded, etc... by maxx
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OK I have several problems with this application. If there was a Japanese family of Kitsune why are they near Wales? Why would they take the baby away? Anyone that learned they were Kistune would assume naturally the baby is one too...

Then even if you found a suitable way to explain that away... she bit him he would change at eh first moon and as a small child with no help or guidance I can't honestly say he would survive.

Then his life... how he lives how he gets supplies and such... need to explain. I don't care if he is pickpocket or a male whore but you need to explain a little.

He can NOT as a infected male have more than like 4 tails. A queen has 9. Males are rare to being with, infections are even rarer so again you cant have that type of power.

I would honestly if was me sit and rethink him a bit more and put more time into his story.


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